Looks great! The only thing I might say is that the body of the woman in the first panel looks a little less feminine than in the others... Know what I mean?
She's pretty close to the viewer... and she is still a skinny, wiry, young girl... are you commenting on the shape of her arms maybe?
Definitely something for me to think about... but right now I've got to keep moving forward with color. I'll get to small drawing tweaks afterwards if I have time...
Thanks for the input thought... I'll flag that panel for later examination.
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Looks great! The only thing I might say is that the body of the woman in the first panel looks a little less feminine than in the others... Know what I mean?
Hmm... I'm not sure what you mean, Dan...
She's pretty close to the viewer... and she is still a skinny, wiry, young girl... are you commenting on the shape of her arms maybe?
Definitely something for me to think about... but right now I've got to keep moving forward with color. I'll get to small drawing tweaks afterwards if I have time...
Thanks for the input thought... I'll flag that panel for later examination.
Cool art! "The Dude" gave me your contact info, but the earthlink email bounced. Can you please email me at twilight@extremezone.com? Thanks.
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