Friday, January 12, 2007

Another proponent for "naked hands"...



More progress... albeit slow and cumbersome.
This current fight scene is in it's finishing stages and all the players are in position for the finale. The next 3 or so pages will be fast and furious, with little or no transition to break up the brutality... so I just wanted to establish character positions one last time before just zooming in on the two main combatants. The young Girl is trapped between her fear of the nearby violence and her revulsion towards the crippled and dying Director, who in turn is now in the right position for the coming denuemont.
These sort of "set-up" panels are the hardest to pull off because they require a great deal of information about the environment as well as the characters involved. The final panel shows the figures in relative positions... and this becomes a bit important later on in order for the story to flow well. We'll just have to see how it all turns out...

Life in general is in a stall right now as I battle my bank over a balance discrepancy and I lack extra funds to simply run around and enjoy myself. I suppose that it helps to motivate me to work on the pages, out of default... but it doesn't exactly put me in the sweetest of moods to know that I haven't any choice in the matter.

Well... it's back to the grind now...
Damn,.. I just wish that I'd refrained from putting friggin' gloves on the Director's hands now. The hands in the panel where he's on his back looking up at the Girl came out very well... and I am no longer as pleased with the rendering now that I had to put those goofy-assed gloves over them for continuity.

Crap.

7 comments:

Anonymous said...

Hey Greg,

You forgot to send me that email....

rob@fatdogamps.com

Greg said...

Err...
Could you refresh my memory?
I can't recall who you are in order to send out an e-mail...

Sorry,
GREG

Anonymous said...

Robbie Reynolds

The Keeper's Notes said...

Lookin' good, Greg....

Greg said...

Thanks, Justin...

It's already been changed, for the record.
These things always happen once I get to spend some time with the pencils after they are finished. Sometimes, whole panels simply disappear and become something else...

The changes in these panels are minor though... simple background element tweaks.

Still waitin on that Moonglade strip you promised me you'd do...
I sure hope that you haven't given up on that. I haven't lost any of the anticipation for it...

The Keeper's Notes said...

Moonglade! Wow! I don't know if that will ever see the light of day...I've got some old sketches that I did for it up on my blog..some of my earlier posts.

Glad to see you actually 'doing it'..ie a full book!

Greg said...

Aww... c'mon Justin!
That used to be your baby... I was so psyched to see it in a finished form...

You're lettin' me down, man!
Just DO IT... once the first few pages are done... the rest will take care of itself. Trust me, buddy...

You think THIS story I'm working on was originally supposed to be full length?...