Just a quick post...
This last panel is giving me fits... but so far I'm liking the direction that it's going.
I'm just trying to get past this page so that I can finalize the wind-up sequence. I can't really be sure of how well the ending will fit until I actually start thumbnailing out the page... and that can't happen until this page gets finished.
Structure, baby... STRUCTURE.
I'll post the final panel in a day or so once it's finished completely and photocopied for delivery to my Inker.
I found these last few panels to be kinda fun... I hope that it shows in the work itself.
Here is the "drip sequence" I was talking about that immediately preceeds the big simultaneous punch panel.